Date Night – A So So Comedy Thriller

Date Night is a so-so comedy thriller. For those wishing to master the screenwriting craft that’s a good thing, because you can often learn the most from a movie that isn’t too good or too bad. Its strengths and its flaws are easier to see.

With stars Steve Carrel and Tina Fey it’s hard to avoid comparing the film to The Office and 30 Rock. That just gives us another instance of the truism that the best writing in comedy is in television, not film. But the brilliance of those shows is actually more difficult to explain. With Date Night, techniques and choices, successes and failures, are clear.

The biggest challenge when you write a comedy screenplay is setting up the comic structure, what I call the “clothesline,” on which you will hang the jokes. This clothesline is essential in sitcoms too, but it is much harder to create in a movie because it has to stretch for at least 90 minutes, not 22.

You create the clothesline using two major structural elements, the comedy sub-genre and your hero’s desire line. This is where most comedy writers go wrong. They don’t realize that there are seven major comedy sub-genres, including romantic comedy and farce, and each has a completely different set of story beats you have to hit to tell the story well (see the Comedy Class for the beats in all 7 sub-genres).

In Date Night, writer Josh Klausner uses the comedy thriller form (a kind of action comedy), which goes back at least to the early Hitchcock films. Here we have the innocent couple on the run, forced to battle criminals or spies. This form is not used much nowadays because combining comedy with thriller creates real problems of tone. If the opponent is too deadly the jokes aren’t funny. There’s also a number of contrivances you have to explain away, most notably how two average shmos could possibly compete with, much less defeat, hardened criminals, and why don’t they just go to the police.

The Date Night script gets barely passing grades in these basic areas of storytelling. The unbelievability of Steve and Tina going up against professional killers is always present. But this isn’t a fatal problem because the audience just falls back on the fact that this is a comedy.

The advantage of using the comedy thriller sub-genre is that it gives the script a strong desire line that extends to the end of the story. Much like the detective line in The Hangover, this couple’s desire to escape attack and find the incriminating flash drive creates a strong narrative drive on which the writer can hang any number of funny but episodic scenes. It also allows him to save the funniest scene for last, which is one of the gold standards in a comedy movie and almost never happens.

As a comedy writer, your goal is always to make the comedy build. The laughs should stand on the waves of the laughs that come before until the audience is gasping for breath. That rarely happens in a movie comedy because you have to extend the story for 90+ minutes and because you have to tie up all the story business as you get to the end of the line.

Klausner solves this problem in Date Night, first by setting up the thriller line and second by keeping the final battle simple. Without a last omplex action scene to divert the audience from the jokes, Klausner can keep the focus on two top comic performers doing an incompetent pole dancing routine that brings the house down.

With the strong if hokey clothesline, the strength of the movie can come through, which are the funny bits that pop up throughout the story. Lines like “He turned the gun sideways; it’s a kill shot,” gags like the painfully slow motor boat and scenes like the marital spat between the Tripplehorns are laugh-out-loud funny. In Hollywood, the rule is if you have three laugh-out-loud moments in the film you have a hit. That’s a low bar for movies as opposed to television, but the important thing for writers to focus on is how you get those laughs. And that comes from the comic structure that supports the gags.

If setting up the clothesline is one of the big strengths of Date Night, the attempt to make the comedy come from character is one of the big weaknesses. Most writers have heard how valuable it is for the comedy to come from character, but few really know what it means, or how to do it. I discuss this a lot in the Comedy Class, because if you can master this set of techniques you immediately become one of the top comedy writers in the business. Let me focus on one technique in this area.

You must begin the story by establishing a deep weakness/need in the main character – in this case a couple – which then will be solved by the story line. In other words, the hero’s weakness must be embedded and solved all the way back at the premise line. The premise is your story stated in a single sentence. The Date Night premise might be described like this: a couple whose marriage has become predictable defeats criminals and renews their love.

The premise is like the hypothesis in a science experiment. It’s the fundamental truth about the world you are trying to establish. In an experiment you may determine that your hypothesis is wrong. But in a story you have to prove the premise. The sequence of story events must display in detail the truth about life you describe in one line. This is also called fulfilling the “promise of the premise,” the promise you make to the audience when they agree to come to the theater to see this story.

Klausner clearly wants to tell a story that proves the premise because he spends a great deal of time at the beginning showing that this couple’s marriage has grown stale from the demands of work and children. Even their date night hits the same old routine. The thriller structure is supposed to be the vehicle of renewal. It’s the same technique used, correctly, in Rear Window, where the Jimmy Stewart character learns to respect and commit to the Grace Kelly character by solving a crime with her.

But while this process is given lip service here, it never actually happens. Sure, escaping killers and bringing them to justice makes for an exciting night and a fun makeout session on the lawn the next morning. But it has nothing to do with changing what’s wrong between these two and how they will act differently toward one another for a 1001 nights in the future.

Klausner is definitely doing some things right here that most comedy screenwriters, even those with films under their belts, are not doing. He’s not reaching the level of the sitcoms in which these stars normally appear, but those sitcoms don’t have to tell a funny story over 90 minutes. Still, I can’t help feeling disappointed with this film. When a writer knows how to create comedy from character, you get great thematic comedies like Groundhog Day that express recognizable truths at the same time they make you laugh. Date Night is simply not in that league.

Watching Movies In HD Brings Your Family Together

With the busy modern life that many people live, it is getting harder and harder for folks to come together as a family to enjoy some old fashioned family time. Between homework and soccer games in distant cities, there are very few opportunities for folks to get together and enjoy each other’s company. Fortunately, many families are looking to counteract that trend by starting a family movie night. All you will have to do is figure out which night of the week that you will want to be gathering together, and make sure that nobody schedules any conflicts for that night. Then, you and your family can gather around the television set and watch some of your favorite movies in HD. Doing this will be one step that your family can take in order to enjoy family time.

The first thing that you will want to do in order to plan a weekly family movie night is to clear everyone’s schedule for the night in question for the first month. Starting something new usually takes a lot of concentration in order to be able to make it stick. If you are able to get everything off of the schedule then it will be more likely that your family will actually stick to the plans that you are making. If everyone knows ahead of time that they will be watching a movie in high definition, then they will be more likely to make the effort to have family movie night stick.

A good tool for being able to pick movies out for family movie night is satellite tv. With satellite you will be able to have a wide selection of movies to choose from. With the selection and flexibility that satellite provides you will be able to have a more successful family movie night. For example, should you find yourselves having a good conversation around the dinner table you can extend your talk and pause the movie. Were you to only have a basic network television you would not be able to do that. Instead of being a slave to the clock, satellite allows your family to control the time.

After watching the movie you may want to start a family movie journal where everyone is able to write a little bit about what they thought of the movie that they just watched. Many family members may appreciate to write a little bit about what they liked and did not like in order to be able to look back on the journal years later with fond memories. Whether horror movies, comedies or sports movies, having a movie journal will be a great way for you and your family to connect with the past.

If you are serious about starting and sticking with a family movie night, then the first step that you should take is making sure that you have satellite tv. Once you have that installed you will find that starting and enjoying family movie night will be a breeze.

Good Comedy Movies

One of the best ways to unwind and revitalize is to watch good comedy movies. It doesn’t matter if you’ve had a bad day or a good one. Comedy movies always help you take the stress off. But – wait! Are all comedy movies as good as they are marketed by the media? Obviously no, as some of them are a big waste of money and you quit watching them after some time. However, good movies will turn your boring day into a hoot. Here’s a list of some great movies that you can sit back and enjoy with your family and kids. Some of them require parental guidance.

  1. Elf
  2. Shrek
  3. Pirates of the Caribbean
  4. Hancock
  5. The Mask
  6. Toy Story
  7. Ice Age
  8. Megamind
  9. Kung Fu Panda
  10. Monster vs Aliens
  11. The Incredibles
  12. The Pink Panther
  13. Austin Powers
  14. Honey, I Shrunk the Kids
  15. The Green Hornet

These are some of the most fantastic comedy movies you can ever watch.

Movies are not only a source of entertainment, but they are also a source of education. All movies have a theme around which the story is woven. Apart from that “laughter is the best medicine”.

Parents generally feel that by watching movies, the kids waste time and don’t concentrate on their studies. While this may be true is extreme cases, whereby children are watching movies for over 3 hours a day, it will not hurt if you watch one small one-hour movie during weekends. Everyone wants to relax and have fun – even kids. So, why not be a part of their fun? You don’t know what great, innocent remarks kids make when they watch a movie. Some of them have even dedicated a Facebook page for movies like Twilight (which most of the kids haven’t liked).

You should remember that as a caregiver, it is important that you monitor your children and make sure that they watch comedy movies, which are appropriate for their ages, and so that they remain out of trouble. Also, they would not enjoy a movie, which they cannot understand.

One of the best places to access such movies is Internet. There are many websites, which have relevant information, and as you conduct your search you will find several websites that offer genuine reviews. You can ask your family and friends for referrals on the best comedy movies.

It is OK to go to a theater, but there is nothing like enjoying a good comedy movie in the comforts of your home.